Alright the back flashes I over did it. This was again an attempt to add something interesting to the novel. I think it's important information but some of them may go on too long.
Honestly even as I'm writing this I'm torn on what to do with them. Some people liked them others told me to make them prologues others still just want them out of the story. Since these kinds of thoughts will leave me paralyzed for another year I'm just going to leave them. This may not be the best path I'm sorry. If you do enjoy them I'm happy as well. I think everyone has valid points on these chapters.
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