Thanks for reading! This one was pretty rough. I had to fix and rewrite about 30% of the sentences. Many made no sense at all when read. I don't know how people got through this chapter before. Any ways I decided to not have the stuff being shown be in past tense. I wasn't sure but most everything besides the times when John is looking back at things not being shown are in past tense. So yeah grammar and past tense fixes.
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